How I wished you were next to me that day
When I was told that this was not my home
When I was asked to change my name because I am married now
When I was compelled to go to stay with your parents and greet mine next day
As we were on vacation that Dussehra
All that fuss, in a shush.
I never heard that mute alarm ringing
How I wished you standing by me
When I lost my baby in womb
When I was judged for losing the unborn
Again, I ignored that ringing alarm
How I fancy that alarm wasn’t snoozed
How I wish an alarm would ring loud and notify me whenever I am wronged
How I want to take a stand and say a NO
How I long now not to crumble under any pressure
It’s late now, a decade late, but now I am going to say loud
It’s a No, to all for you
It’s a late cry
And the last cry
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
Ahaaaaa! Each and every word had an affect on me. A strong, empowering, and beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing this with us.
So nice and touchy poem…Loved it. Please check out my blog http://www.ketakimalwade.com. Your feedback will be appreciated.
I love the play of words here. Beautifully expressed.
Thanks Tina
A heart warming post.. Loved how you have placed the words to create a great impact..
Thanks for your love Anubhuti
Such deep words and beautifully expressed emotions, though sad reality of women life.
Thanks Kinshoo. Sadly, many women still face this situation.
In the name of tradition and other so called expectations a woman many times does not realise she is wronged. Good that the cry was better late than never.
True Neha, women are bounded with expectations without appreciation. Thanks for stopping by.
Wow that’s beautiful, just loved the way you have Express all the emotions behind
Glad you liked it. Thanks.
This is really powerful of you to speak about such emotional words. More Power to you girl 🙂
Thanks Gunjan. it was inspired by many women’s sad experience.
I just loved it, brilliance! How beautifully you have mentioned all hard hitting things in most convienent words. Lovely piece of writing.
Thank you Dipika for your encouraging words.
so heartwarming and true words. this is the destiny of Indian women sure nice read
Sad reality of many women. Thanks for stopping by Deepa.
You have beautifully played with the words ..just loved this
Thanks Ruchie.
Powerful poem. Alarm must ring whenever someone is wronged.
Thank you for stopping by.
A beautiful exhibition of heartwarming imagery, i really liked the intensity of the emotions that you created with your words! Thank you for sharing such an emotionally charged post, according to your convenience please do read some of my writings would love to know what you think about them ☺️
Thank you for your encouraging words. I am glad you connect with you.
Thank you for respecting my request, & the pleasure was all mine ☺️?
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